A Minion's Musing

OK Guys, this time I have decided to try something new.  This is something totally out of my comfort zone.  I might never do this again but I want your thoughts.  A couple of days ago, I read a poem by a Minion fan named KS.  It was beautiful and I certainly can't do this as well as her but I am taking a swing. 

The Flower

What is more beautiful than a flower

Her velvet petals and beautiful hues

She stands tall and causes all to look on her

With admiration and awe we watch her

 

A storm approaches her from the west

Great hail and lighting

With strong wind and rain

Assault her fragile petals and stem

 
She bends her head low

Under the weight of the rain

Touching the ground prostrate

Close to the point of death

But strength overcomes the rain

As she straightens herself in the sun

The weight of the water removed

She returns to give the earth her strength

 

Under danger of attack by human hand

She carries on her life

Refusing to stop showing her inner beauty

For the good of the earth and bees 

Her beautiful petals unfold

Revealing her substance to the world

Waiting to be nourished

And give of her significance in return

That's the Minion's Musing.  Please let me know what you think.